![]() ![]() ![]() The sex scenes are also physically uncomfortable to imagine, in particular due to the use of the word “womb” to describe Claire’s vagina. We’re not quite deep enough in her perspective, and part of this might be because of the reader’s accidental disconnect due to the frequent scenes of rape. It’s not these aren’t understandable, but they’re not very compelling. ![]() First she wants to not starve, then she wants to escape. It’s difficult to suspend disbelief for both, as they don’t connect other than happening in the same place at the same time.Īsking the audience to accept too many unbelievable things at the same time can lead to confusion or frustration.Ĭlaire is not a very relatable heroine, and she doesn’t have much of a motivation throughout the book. Both are interesting, to be clear, but it’s not clear what they have to do with one another. Fleshing out the rules of this world a bit more would help a great deal, as well as focusing on either the dystopian element or the Alpha/Beta/Omega element. ![]()
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